Jumped. I ran and jumped, closed my eyes and held my breath. i felt the rush of air and heard the crashing of waves. I am falling so fast i can feel tiny pricks all over my face. My hair is blowing everywhere. Tears begin to form because of the cold. My arms and legs were limber and limp. I have this sudden rush of adrenaline but also it was gut wrenching. I can hear the cars honking and braking hard. The pressure begins to build and i can't take another breath. So this is how Alice felt when she fell well not quite because she didn't have cement water catching her fall. I wonder if they will notice. It doesn’t matter because this feeling is amazing. I am still.......
-CF
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Awww!!!!
ReplyDeleteThat would be so cute!!!
I would love that.
Aaannd.... You wouldn't get that fat!!
Karen says:
ReplyDeletePlease ignore my previous comment.
It was meant to be for Kallie's.
I love what you wrote it's so inspiring, really.
I am proud of you.
Hahaha.
like karen said that was relly well writen. you really got some talent. keep it up -SBM
ReplyDeletehow depressing. too bad it's their last adrenaline rush since i highly doubt they will ever feel again after they kill themselves. im sure at least one person cares about another person.
ReplyDeletewoaah, i could totally picture/feel this
ReplyDeletebut it's real, for many people too...
hmmmm, im sure we have all felt that feeling of "jumping" or "wanting to jump"
hahaha HMM SBM? who is that??? haha tyler: haha i guess yes it would be their last adrenaline rush.. haha yeah but for that person they didnt think anyone cared..obviously... kat: i think we all have too
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